You have bought furniture from a store. When you received there were some damages.
Write a letter to the manager.
- inform him about the furniture
- explain the damage
- ask the manager to do something
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the study table I had purchased from your Borivali store, which was damaged at the time of delivery. Last Sunday, I visited the store to buy a study desk for my daughter, and one of the sales representatives showcased a variety of them. She really liked the one with the theme of a princess and blue in colour. It was a fantastic piece of furniture, a perfect combination of the quality and value for money. Immediately, I purchased it, the invoice number is KV01529 and promised to be delivered within 3 days.
However, when it arrived at my place, I was totally disappointed, as it was broken. To elaborate further, the chair was having one broken leg and the desk many scratches on it. Being such a big brand, such product quality and service are highly regretted. Moreover, the courier boy was so unprofessional and avoiding my request to talk to his manager.
I would like you to exchange the study table with a new one. Additionally, I had emailed to the head of the quality department about the unpleasant experience.
I am expecting immediate action on this case and like to advise to strengthen the quality check before making a delivery to the customers.
Yours sincerely,
Kaplan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'strengthening'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'advise' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: strengthening
... action on this case and like to advise to strengthen the quality check before making a deliv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, really, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82110091743 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93413442997 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623853211009 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8643307834 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8461538462 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0725335553189 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225485814027 0.0766984524023 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268114188754 0.0603063233224 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0410126829419 0.12726935374 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266543204459 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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