In some countries it is illegal employers to reject job appications on the basis of age criteria .it a positive or negative development.
According to me,I think illegal employers are reject job applicantions because it is detrimental effect human being life. I am fully agree with this statement. There are plethora reasons behind it. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
In the sophisticated era, modern world of world all dwellers are very well education in the citizens.Hence, education play a vital role in their life because it all depart people life.Afterthat, todays person are co- education in their life and society give the respect and support all the work .For instance, today are very touch competition in the career like docter, teacher, police, fashion design, engineer and business etc. Therefore, dwellers are very obligation in their work . They are very punctual in their work places. But, they should give the best proformance in the office.In my view, employmee life is very hard because it they full time spend in their office rather than work and deal
in the international company and foreign company deal.
To trigger with, illegal employers are reject in the campany. Otherwise, all candidate are equal work in their company. Moreover, they should be perform best in their job.Last but not the least, illegal employers are not equal work later to all higher studies education employeers. But, they have a higher standard in the education level and they have very necessary to the work because company have contract to the foreign countries.For instance, Australia, Canada, New zealand and london so on.In my point of point, illegal employer have not well education in their life. They have detrimental effect to all the candidate.
In summarise, after analysing that issue reckon, in my opinion, illegal employers could be reject in the campany because today all dwellers have all education in the society. Then, why we should waste seat to give iilegl employers.They have well education and we during the job in any companieslike international and foriegn campanies.They should good message to the todders because they should focus in the study they will achieve any things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1207.87684729 145% => OK
No of words: 337.0 242.827586207 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20771513353 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7688593414 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507418397626 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 379.143842365 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 115.496531934 50.4703680194 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.0 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.33497536946 431% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873958921637 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046144950773 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647440320493 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602383713023 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547848806889 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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