Factory farming is becoming a major revenue carcer in many countries.what are the advantages and disadvantage of factory farminG
In the globalisation era, today technology fast is very fast. Dwellers are use the electronic gudgets rathan than work.I am disagree with this statement.There are plethora reason behind it.I will dicuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
According to me, farming play a vital role in human being life.Hence, farmering are give crop,food and harvest etc.Afterthat, today factory are open in any nations.I think that, they should be detrimental impact in the human being life .There are uplift up all of diseases.For instances,hypertension,
anxiety,depression,blood pressure, heart disease,cardiac and obesity etc.But also,there have umpteen factories open in any countries.In my mind, they should be harmful to all the dweller life.Therefore,factories always open in any times.
Nevertheless, some people believe that village farming is one of best because they always supply the freshment fruits, vegetables, crops and health all types of food compare to the factor farming.otherwise, there is no deyning the fact that factory farming could be umpteen save stone always in any years. I think that, they have cause alots of health problem in their human being life.Last but not the least, factory farming cause plethore pollution in the public areas .For instance,air,
Land,noise,soil and water pollution etc. In my opinion,pollutions are very detrimental to all age group like toddler,Juvenile,teenager,adolescent and old so on.
In summarise,after issue that issue reckon,in my view,there is no doubt is village farming is best according to factory farming because factory cause umpteen pollution. As far as they could not supply the refreshment materials to the customers and but also,they have bad impact in their human life.I think that,life is golden period in any age and I could not be
Promote to bad thing in my life.As well as,according to me,village farming is best forever in any generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54761904762 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.0065616157 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.873143552 49.4020404114 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.875 106.682146367 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.75 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.875 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 44.0 5.01903807615 877% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170842740898 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774069359089 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077483801062 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824177120567 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615496214226 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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