You live in Canada. In a magazine, they printed some information about your home country. However, there were some mistake in that article.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
- Describe the mistake
- Give correct information on the same
- Give some topics to them to publish.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in connection with the article which you had printed in your magazine about India. The title of the topic was “Diversity in India” and it was printed on 26th November 2018. The article was interesting and I enjoyed reading it. However, I want to point that there was a grave mistake with the map. It didn’t show the state of Jammu and Kashmir as an Indian territory.
Let me give you more details on it. There are some parts of Kashmir which are illegally and forcefully occupied by Pakistan. Although, it is declared by the United Nations, that it is an integral part of India. This information is still not known to many people around the world. Therefore, I request you to immediately rectify it, to avoid any unwanted controversy.
Apart from this, I see that you have not covered anything on Southern Part of India. I would suggest exploring more on Temples of South India as well on Contribution of South India towards Science.
I am looking forward to seeing the corrected map and articles o Southern India soon.
Yours Faithfully,
R. Chandrasekhar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly and forcefully occupied by Pakistan. Although it is declared by the United Nations th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85106382979 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79313570419 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.476977938 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.1428571429 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4285714286 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123590011068 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444343423633 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424396815216 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056513463047 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367636457298 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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