You are working in giant company which does financial or other items help to the different group of local community. Write to your manager about some group you want to provide help next year.
Describe a group.
What help do the group need.
What kind of help you expect to provide.
Dear Mr. James,
First of all, I appreciate the initiative being taken by the management of our company to support the local society financially and with the items of needs. I am writing to suggest one orphan school to which our company may help next time.
Let me describe the details. This is a school for orphan children named as 'Desire Society' situated in Gurgaon. Pupils are too talented and recently won the first runners up trophy in cricket tournament held locally.
I believe that if professional training will be provided to these youngsters then they will definitely do wonders in this field. Moreover, these kids will encourage others in the society to develop their interests without thinking of any barriers.
Therefore, I suggest that our company should sponsor cricket training under the guidance of professional coach for these children. If our budget allow us then help with necessary cricket equipment such as bats, balls, jerseys would be of great help.
I hope that you will take my suggestion under consideration and do your best to help this society.
Yours sincerely,
Ell Green
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| 2019-02-08 | whatever1031 | 78 | view |
| 2018-11-14 | Ell | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13114754098 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63019264402 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672131147541 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7394515798 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3636363636 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172845799646 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608468366457 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603578074451 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961147133749 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656293121591 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.