In many countries today, there is insufficient respect to old people. What are the reasons? What problems might it bring to the society?
It is irrefutable that advancement and development in technology has made the current generation proud and overconfident as compare to previous generations. In few nations these days, older people are not admired so much by present youth. In this essay, the reasons of this effect and the probable outcome will be discussed in the following paragraphs in detail.
Firstly, the reasons behind this behavior. Technology has main role to play in this attitude. Current generation has evolved in many ways since the technology has done major changes in the society. Such as, instant results in techniques, highly advanced way of living and developments in various fields. All of this collectively has boosted our confidence and, in some ways, makes us overoptimistic as compare to previous generations. Which has altered our behavior towards older generations.
Secondly, the outcome of this behavior. Discipline will be the major part which will be affected in near future by this attitude and relationship between different generations will be hampered. On an overall, lack of communication will be the output for the society, which can lead the society to uncultured and undisciplined in many ways.
Finally, I will conclude, technology has helped us in many ways not only the current generations but the previous one also, on that part we should be proud, but the sacrifice of our older to bring us on the current stage is equally important. Supporting in all ways to all the generations to show humanity and for the sake of unity, this should be our prime moto to have healthy life on earth for many generations to come.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tic as compare to previous generations. Which has altered our behavior towards older ...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our behavior towards older generations. Secondly, the outcome of this behavior. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11610486891 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95022223691 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.461879862 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0503052423747 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0192766730737 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242081326525 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0323496457445 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00879988213468 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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