People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are go out what are the cause and solutions?
In the modern age, why people have never feel safe in the house's either they go house. Obviously there are couple of shortcomings. Presenting my view I would intend to explore the aforementioned view in following paragraphs.
One should provide a variety of reasons to justify the opinion that there are probably a number of factors involved why people not feel safe. The chief cause might be that people are scared about our natural calamities in which time they come. For instance, in the Japan earthquake and tsunami are come in the every year and most of the people died in every year. As well as subsequent factor could be that in the out of hoses environment are fully surrounded by the air pollution. As a consequence, people's skin is fully damaged by the pollution and it is being difficult to take brathed in polluted air.re more likely to travel by own vehicle's to travel the local.
However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of some machines are make by the science which gives the knowledge about in what time natural calamities are come and people go far the concrete building. The successful way to confront this would be to strict rules should be make the government against the pollution and local people must be gone by the private vehicles. It is obviously favourable to grow the plants in the suburbs of cities and in the sides of the rodes.
To conclusion, although there are good reason to takckle the problem. But in opinion I said that people ouhgt to used the solar car and bykes it is also environment friendly and never produced any kind of noise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'felt'.
Suggestion: felt
...n the modern age, why people have never feel safe in the houses either they go house...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'action'?
Suggestion: action
... travel the local. However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of some machi...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'made'?
Suggestion: made
...this would be to strict rules should be make the government against the pollution an...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.675 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55328669741 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7817851813 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18006112974 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576986131404 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743080939446 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101120457298 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567970359962 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.