Some people believe that physical fitness of strong individuals and teams is the reason for the most sports achievements. Others, however, think that mental attitude is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is undisputed that achievements in the sports are the result of hard work, talent and strong commitment. Presently, some people opine that players and teams should be physically fit and vivid to accomplish a great success in the sports. On the contrary, others reckon that mentally fit players are relevant for the sports achievements. Here, I would like to account both views with my own perceptions.
There are manifold points to endorse the former view. First and the foremost, players with sound physical fitness can make hundred percent endeavors for the victory of their team. To demonstrate, sport is like a work which needs a desperate movement of whole body parts, especially hands and legs. So, individuals should be stern enough to manifest their phenomenal performance. For instance, in the running competition, legs of players should be strong and compact to complete the race in a short period of time. Consequently, physical fitness of strong individuals is the most salient factor behind sports achievement. By contrast, others have conflicting views.
They think mental attitude is the foundation to make an intense success. Without strong mentality and positive attitudes towards game, it is impossible to win. Taking a real life example in consideration, in the world cup 2018, Other world cup winning team Argentina could not make their place in the semi- final because of apathy and there were not mentally prepared. Therefore, mental attitude is an indispensable factor to win awards in the competitions.
To recapitulate, undeniably, players should be physically fit to be in competitions. But, I think, mental attitudes with passions
are needed to achieve goals.
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Suggestion: a hundred
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, for instance, i think, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 269.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32342007435 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93624294693 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 106.607317073 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4743280062 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2352941176 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 3.70975609756 404% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291388877768 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875091493393 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560052710225 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138913582448 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851794021064 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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