Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
The major capital cities of the world are highly crowded. Overpopulation is one of the threatening problem in this century and governments need to take action on this problem in order to avoid development of other consequences. In this essay, the major factors behind the cites overcrowded and solutions are explained.
Firstly, factor that hugely effects the population of a city, is its business opportunity. Due to their attractive opportunities, most major cities are filled and congested with people from different part of the worlds. Also, the convenient urban plan and transportation attract the migrants to stay in the capital cities. For instance, even though Australia demands migrants with different skill sets for development of the country, state government announced that Sydney and Queensland have already been overly crowded. Therefore, governments require developing the strategies to equalize the population all over the countries.
In terms of solutions, the population from major cities can be handled by using several methods. Firstly, creating the business opportunities and the cheap housings at the rural area which are the basic needs for a civilian to survive, will be a vital movement. Furthermore, developing a tax allowance plan for people living in rural cities will also encourage them to move from capital to rural cities. On the other hand, authorities can also limit the entrance of new migrants to major populated cities.
To conclude, equalization of population is important for balanced development of a country. Although it cannot be denied that the capital cities are full with business opportunities and state of art facilities, if governments can develop similar opportunities and better allowances plan in rural cities, the equal distribution of population seems to be an achievable goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... crowded. Therefore, governments require developing the strategies to equalize th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50883392226 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06829373603 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554770318021 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5744123327 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184028409144 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688720675737 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076011251019 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130616291484 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124882161274 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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