The charts below show population statistics in two countries of the UK from 1700 to 2000

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The charts below show population statistics in two countries of the UK from 1700 to 2000

The first chart illustrates the population size in England and Wales between 1700 and 2000, while the second chart compares the birth and death rates over the same period.

Overall, the population increased significantly throughout this period. In contrast, birth and death rates fluctuated, although the annual death rate was always lower than the birth rate.

The population stood at 5 million in 1700. This figure more than doubled to 11 million in 1800 and by 1900 it had reached 27 million. The population reached 40 million in 2000.

The annual birth rate in 1700 was 30 per one thousand people. There was a rise to 38 per thousand by 1800. However, the birth rate then declined, and the same figure of 25 per thousand was recorded for the years 1900 and 2000. The death rate witnessed a similar fluctuation. In 1700, the death rate was 25 per thousand and this then rose to reach a peak of 31 per thousand in 1800. The trend then followed the same pattern as the birth rate. There was a fall to 20 per thousand in 1900 and a further dramatic fall in 2000 to a figure of 9 per thousand.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63106796117 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52432785599 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480582524272 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0423592549 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7272727273 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1276433023 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570256170631 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566728726987 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886860254535 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583871926725 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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