Travelling
In the last few decades, travelling is feasible due to modification in migration system in many nations. Despite the travelling is feasible, it has a several merits and demerits. I believe that benefits of travelling over shadowed the drawbacks of travelling. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of travelling.
First and foremost, with proliferation travelling, tourism industry is developed well and become a backbone of economy of many nations. Furthermore, Many people are employed in air and tourism industry. Apart from this, local people enjoy higher standard of life because government provide better sevices like roads, water supply etc. to visitors.
Secondly, travelling compact the gaps of cultural and traditional understanding and play an integral role for culture exchanges. As a inllustation, every year many people travel to holy city of varanashi in India, to know traditions of indian culture. Apart from this, travelling plays important role to share science and technology with other and nations to make world better.
On other hand, travelling has drawbacks too. One major drawbacks is people carry harmful viruses and bacterias with themselfs. While travelling these virus and becteria speard across areas of world. As an illustration, in 2017 Indian government identify Nipha virus, that was carried by man from malashyia. As a result, more than 100 people died with nipha virus.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, it is necessary to overcome the drawbacks of travelling to make world better.
- It has become easier and become affordable for people to travel other countries. Do you think it is positive and negative development? 56
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many Cities in the world are now, ' one big traffic jam'. 56
- Demand of food 56
- Many companies sponser sport as way of advertising. 78
- All children should study a foreign language in school. Starting in the earliest grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 22
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'this virus' or 'these viruses'?
Suggestion: this virus; these viruses
...terias with themselfs. While travelling these virus and becteria speard across areas of wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, well, while, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41393442623 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93186936412 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631147540984 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5592115122 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350910664713 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125704277458 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124716516212 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20570243311 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122965055192 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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