A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city ? use specific reasons and detail to develop your essay
Obviously, each people have several opinion about everything which is they are ways. I have opinion which is seem to me all people have many problem are depend to each people which are ways.
First of all, each town or city is definite have deficiency and excess likewise other city. They are already have habit and social different in they are place while they are move already sure they have opinion about my residence example I am living at Pontianak which is belonging town is small when is compare with big city such as Jakarta or other big city. At Jakarta city and Pontianak city have sure social which different with their life style and surrounding.
They want to move at my place, they will see structure which is little, road is small, social life, and building. They maybe like with circles and social life us because our circles still clean and many free are green so that air fresh is always still we get in my city and social life which are harmonious, kinship, and take care between one same other. It is different with social life in big city especially Jakarta city. Their social life are already arrogant mostly and cannot care about social life in the around.
Secondly , they are maybe cannot adaptasion with our the road. It is because our road are still small and sometimes we get traffic jam at the moment and besides in there are broken the road which is perforated and if we see from building, we have building which is small and cannot high. Furthemore, at my city is very difficult get jobs. So, many people at my city go to big city to get looking for jobs. However, l am very like my town because l love kinship.
In conclusion, I opinion between big city and my town are surely have different from all thing hinge each people in undergo.
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Sentence: Obviously, each people have several opinion about everything which is they are ways.
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Sentence: I have opinion which is seem to me all people have many problem are depend to each people which are ways.
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Sentence: First of all, each town or city is definite have deficiency and excess likewise other city.
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Sentence: They are already have habit and social different in they are place while they are move already sure they have opinion about my residence example I am living at Pontianak which is belonging town is small when is compare with big city such as Jakarta or other big city.
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Sentence: Secondly , they are maybe cannot adaptasion with our the road.
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Sentence: In conclusion, I opinion between big city and my town are surely have different from all thing hinge each people in undergo.
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Sentence: Secondly , they are maybe cannot adaptasion with our the road.
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