Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports, e.g. tennis and swimming. Discuss about views and give your own opinion.
Sports cater to being healthy and fit as it provides benefits of proper physical exercise. Yet, whether individual or team sports is more beneficial to people is often contented among sports enthusiasts. This essay examines the advantages of both individual and team sports and arrives at a logical conclusion that team sports are more preferable because of the valuable experiences it offers.
First of all, team sports leads to improved coordination and cooperation among players, along with boosting intelligent quotient. For example, football requires accuracy when hitting the ball, all the while, keeping eyes on your opponents. This improves coordination and cooperation between team members as their focus is on keeping the ball out of their competitors’ hands. As such, they often have to measure the distance between players, in order to hit the ball to the intended teammate, utilising mathematical calculations like permutation and combination . Amazing players make use of trajectory calculation and precision, helping them to display outstanding performance.
Moreover, in team games everyone work together as a group, support each other and share glory and disappointment of victory and failure respectively. Besides, they learn the value of teamwork which is essential for success in all walks of life. Thus, these invaluable experiences leads to improved prospects in life.
On the other hand , individual team sports offers supreme freedom when making decisions as you do not have to be considerate of others; but the individual player have to bear the responsibility of failure as well as joy of winning. This may lead to unnecessary physiological pressure to win the game on the participant.
In conclusion, though individual sports have the advantage of increased freedom, the positive impacts such as socialization, improved intelligence, teamwork and goal orientation of team sports outweigh the merits of individual sports. Thus, this essay concludes that team sports are more beneficial than individual sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61612903226 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12749407377 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0946833503 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.066666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125297772929 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465579994813 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701507063872 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757884898511 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720638316161 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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