Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Children sometimes,can have problems At home. they need to be helped and guided toward the right path in order to enlighten their future and their life.The fact that Parents don't have the modern method to teach their children in their home assignments but they can understand what their children want and can advise and help solve them in best ways which Teachers can't.I feel this way for two reasons which i will explore in the following essays.
To begin with,Sometimes,children can have problems and troubles.Sometimes,they can be offended and insulted by someone and it causes them to be sad and can commit to suicide by themselves so that Parents always check their behaviors and learn their weakness and disabilities and parents try their best to comfort his children while they are in trouble.For example,When i was born deaf,I was not happy with being deafness and i used to think that i couldn't be able to fulfill my biggest dream due to deafness and i had a lot of difficulties learning and communicating in a hearing world where i was unfit and acted as a animal and said my parents about this and they understood my weakness,difficulties and dreams and they did their best to advise,motivate and encourage me and they learned sign language and tried searching for a suitable school for the sake of my happiness and future so that i realize that i wouldn't have been who i am today without them.
Furthermore,The emotions and love between parent and children is something special and Parents have strong bonds with their child.The sacrifices and works parents put on is something important for children.For example,a mother who won't feel tired of repeating things over and over times that and can care about their child more than anyone else.Furthermore,Children can learn something new from how parents behave and treat others.Today there are a number of young people who has achieved their dreams because of supportive and hardworking parents.The parents has been large roles in enlightening their child's future and life.
In conclusion,Parents are the one who can always be supportive and try their best to motivate and encourage their children in possible ways and i strongly agree that Parents are the best teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 13.8261648746 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05121293801 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29050571705 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539083557951 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.1344086022 368% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 322.158594484 48.9658058833 658% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 374.8 100.406767564 373% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.2 20.6045352989 360% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.4 5.45110844103 301% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.5376344086 650% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115431870995 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748163507433 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547099995529 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921617757517 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458036936149 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.5 11.7677419355 336% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.83 58.1214874552 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 10.1575268817 305% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.01818996416 127% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.0537634409 314% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.