Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
The small city where there are some facilities and services and it's population isn't as large as the city has.Whereas,The big city where there are a lot of massive facilities and services and there may be getting double in increasing its population.Some people prefer to chose the big city considering living in a big city can be more beneficial comparing to the small city.In contrast,others like to choose a small city thinking that the environment is fresh and pure to live.But from the point of my view,I would to choose the small city over the big city.Here are the following reasons why i like to live in the small city rather than the big city.
To begin with,There are a number of advantages in living in a small city.First of all,the first advantage of living in a small city is that we can stay and breathe in a healthy and fresh environment.The small city where there are some transportation and building which makes the place beautiful and peaceful.Furthermore,The people who live in a small city behave normally and they are very friendly and can help those who is in need of help.I would like to talk this from my experience .i have grown up in a big city where it's population have been increasing year by year.My ancestor lived in a small city and many relatives live in a small city.When i had a long vacations and my parents suggested that i should spent these days to live with many relatives in a small city and i may be able to experience something new and important.I agreed with their advice and went to a small city.when i entered into a small city,many people were respectful and kind and they welcomed me with kindness.That's what made me feel overwhelmed.The foods and crops were fresh and pure produced in a small city than in a big city.Its environment were overwhelming and it made me feel very difficult to leave the small city for my home.
Secondly,the costs of foods,accommodation,clothes and so on are very cheap in a small city than in a big city.For example,One of my neighbours works as a policeman and got transferred to a small city and he live in a small city and he is very happy because his salary isn't large as he expects.when he lives in a big city where things are very expensive and he wouldn't be able to save some moneys but he currently lives in a small city and things aren't expensive and he saves a lot of money after spending for necessary things such as rent,foods,clothes and so on and he decided to buy a new house in a small city and lives happily with his family.
Considering the above advantages of living in a small city.I strongly conclude that living in a small city can be more beneficial and comfortable than in a big city
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in contrast, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 13.8261648746 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 484.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55991735537 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12555916724 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404958677686 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 121.0 20.1344086022 601% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 372.518036476 48.9658058833 761% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 551.75 100.406767564 550% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 121.0 20.6045352989 587% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.75 5.45110844103 582% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.5376344086 704% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265145573334 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196068554471 0.076458572812 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374878831078 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196068554471 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374878831078 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 60.5 11.7677419355 514% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -42.88 58.1214874552 -74% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.10430107527 298% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 49.3 10.1575268817 485% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.35 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.12 8.01818996416 151% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 10.002688172 590% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 50.4 10.0537634409 501% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.247311828 595% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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