Some people think that all parents should take childcare training courses. Do you agree or disagree ?
Some people consider that all fathers and mothers should enroll for a class in a childcare training center . Personally, I completely disagree with this view.
One reason is that it is now possible for parents to get the information they want quickly from the Internet, thanks to the advances in technology. For example, a mother who has kids can share her knowledge about how to take care of them, what kinds of stuff they need and so on in a forum so that everyone can get access to it easily and foster their children better, unlike the past when our ancestors have to raise kids from their folk experience. Also, if they have questions about childcare, they can post it on a parents' Facebook group to be answered by other experienced people.
Another reason is that I consider that today, because of the rise in living standard, people have to work hard to meet basic human needs. If they want to satisfy their children's needs, they should spend most of their time earning a living instead of attending childcare classes. The ability to mother is thought as an instinctual skill and when they were young, by watching their mother's behaviour, they also nurtured their abilities to become one naturally. Therefore, they don't need to go to classes to acquire the skill that they have already mastered.
In conclusion, although of course parents must have the knowledge to look after their kids, they have the means and responsibility to fulfil not only their lives but also their kids' lives by making ends meet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79770992366 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48525557051 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3635984322 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.7 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104411596474 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552997837541 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801718765038 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948142190974 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105293766426 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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