Nowadays , there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development . Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2239.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12356979405 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89558519139 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549199084668 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8020386687 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.583333333 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4166666667 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5833333333 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 79.0 5.01903807615 1574% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14015890599 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612574084409 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945412555593 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109015218841 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960425434538 0.056905535591 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.