All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?
In our modern world, Air pollution has become a major cause of concern as it is increasing at alarming rate. Number of cars on road has been increased exponentially since last 10 years which is a major cause of air pollution in the atmosphere. Hence government should restrict the number of cars that burn fossil fuels like petrol, diesel etc. on road and encourage public to use eco-friendly alternative like electric cars. Electric cars are safe for the environment and they also do not put extra pressure on earth’s limited non-renewable resources.
As electric cars use electricity to run on roads, hence there is no production of smoke due to combustion of fuel. Smoke from the vehicles contributes to the global warming on earth. Electric cars, however, are very much safe for our planet and they do not have any hazardous effects on our health as well. Moreover, electric cars are also very silent hence they help in combating noise pollution as well. For example, In Indore city, which is the cleanest city in India, the municipal corporation has recently restricted the number of traditional cars which run on fossil fuels and encouraged their people to buy electric cars. As a result, the pollution level in the city has gone down significantly and number of respiratory problem related patients has also reduced to 60 % within the 6 months of time period.
Secondly, the electric cars are the safer substitute to the traditional car because the electric energy used to run electric cars is generated from water which is also a renewable resource on earth unlike fossil fuels. Our Mother Earth has very limited resources of non-renewable energy and should be used judiciously. Over the time, our non-renewable sources of energy are depleting in an exponentially fast way and in a recent study published in an environment journal, it was mentioned that by 2050, earth will lose its 70% of the non-renewable sources of energy.
So, I strongly recommend that Government should prohibit the traditional cars which run on fossil fuels and should encourage public to use electric cars which not only produce less pollution but also are more environment-friendly. Also, they help in putting less pressure on those resources of energy which are limited and fast-depleting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09042553191 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95609032025 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497340425532 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7425311715 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.625 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266811016363 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096042285151 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934276125905 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181177572279 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212709819095 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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