Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers.
do you agree or disagree with the following statement? parents are the best teachers. Use
specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Nowdays our life is changing in split second.Population is increasing and with increasing of
population is changing people wiews abaout life.Nowdays youth`s thinking is very different. In
some countries parents have very high role in children behaviour and in their dicision.Wheras in
others ,parents role is not so high they rais their children but don`t teach them the true way of
life and let them decide theirselve.
Firstly,the most important in children life is the example of their parents.child is the face of
family.parents have to teach their children from their behaviour. For example , child which
doesn`t reach the conscious age , he/she takes example of his parents demaneor in defferent
situations or when child does something wrong parents teach him/her the true way.
Secondly,when child reach the conscious age he/she has to make very important decisions
about his/her education,profession and about other serious things.At that time parents have
very significant role.For example,If youht wants to attend university he/she needs a good advice
and the best advice can give parents.Giving big significance to youth`s desire and recollecting
their pased road ,they give the right andvice to him/her.
To sum up,taking into account above mentiond point,we can surely say that parents role in
children`s life has very serious role.parents are the best friends and only mens who do their
best and give their whole posibilities for their children`s future.So, that parents are the best
teachers and advisers for their children is undenible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 263.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70342205323 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21802063657 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.84092663 48.9658058833 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.5 100.406767564 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.875 20.6045352989 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.53405017921 441% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210541565298 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181813170013 0.076458572812 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.244601943529 0.0737576698707 332% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756357240177 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.195497903158 0.0645574589148 303% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 11.7677419355 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 10.9000537634 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.