some parents send their children abroad for study.Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this.
particularly in developing countries like india,parents tend to send their children to abroad for educating well and they try to enhance their children opportunity which is available in foreign countries.In recent time,developed countries have more opportunities than that of in developing countries.It has advantages and disadvantages which i will discuss in forthcoming paragraph.
some people think that,children who are sent to abroad by their parents have more opportunities there and they can improve their knowledge in foreign lands by experiencing new practical aspects .they would get handsome salaries as least wage law is introduced there so they would get money there by their skills and experience.More type of job sectors and verity of courses are available in foreign countries so they would secure their carrier in their interesting fields.For example,A person with good qualification is not stay jobless as government in the foreign countries are also taking step to give employment to all.
On the other hand,some children be not comfortable there as they have to start their new life there.aborad life is far different from india.so some time children have to more effort there because of their fasttrak lifestyle .sometimes different types of cuisines may not be suitable for them.Maintaining their daily life without the support of parents would be very difficult.
In conclusion,every advantages and disadvantages effect differently on children according to their status.if one can use foreign life as the best he or she should definitely apply for abroad education.
- some parents send their children abroad for study.Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this. 56
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- By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- Many people believe that television programs are of no value for children. Do you agree? Why or why not? 80
- Many people believe that television programs are of no value for children. Do you agree? Why or why not? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58436213992 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26130583789 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584362139918 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.124115318 49.4020404114 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 339.25 106.682146367 318% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.75 20.7667163134 293% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.25 7.06120827912 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318607215121 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19472486652 0.084324248473 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355465891809 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19472486652 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355465891809 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.2 13.0946893788 269% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.12 50.2224549098 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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