Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrollment officer. In your letter
• explain why you are writing
• describe your circumstances
• ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding your advertisement about a computer course which I have noticed in a newspaper. I am specifically interested in enrolling to the course being offered by you but, in particular it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
I am ardent follower of technology which made me to build up an extensive computer reference library. As, I have never studied computing formally, due to lack of financial support where I discontinued my graduation. However, I taught myself many computer programming course and databases such as J-Query, SQL-query, Micro-soft spreadsheets and mostly scripting. Also, taken reference from many e-learning sites and tutorials which gave me ease.
I request you to consider my interest towards computing moreover, treat it as special exception. So that I can enroll for the course. As, I do not have any certificate for the knowledge I gained myself in the elementary course. I am ready to come for an interview to prove my technical knowledge in computers. It will really help me to find a relevant job in computing.
Hope to hear from you soon.Kindly do the needful.
Yours Sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ave completed an elementary course. I am ardent follower of technology which ...
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Line 7, column 327, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
... knowledge in computers. It will really help me to find a relevant job in computing. Hope t...
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Line 9, column 28, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Kindly
...mputing. Hope to hear from you soon.Kindly do the needful. Yours Sincerely, ...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dly do the needful. Yours Sincerely, John
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16494845361 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08867854728 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644329896907 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0710171188 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0769230769 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373352487476 0.216113520407 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108512284266 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109836525875 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218476682165 0.12726935374 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133623375718 0.0580467560999 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.