Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree?
Nowadays, technology is growing rapidly, so competition among companies is increasing exponentially and they are putting a lot of work pressure on employees. This essay agrees with this assertion as vacations help to elevate productivity of a person and helps to maintain a good work life balance.
To begin with, a lot of startup companies are establishing nowadays, so for keeping their position in market companies are starving which directly impact employee’s life. Working for longer duration in office actually hampers the productivity of employee because one hardly gets any time to rejuvenate their mind and soul. Taking a couple of day off can help workforce to alleviate their stress level which would eventually ameliorate the fertility at work. Some companies ,for instance LinkedIn and JustPark recently introduced unlimited holiday policy to(for) their staff which significantly improved the efficiency of these companies.
In addition to this, Vacations are essential to maintain a good work-life balance in today’s fast paced world. Almost all the employees are busy with their work life and not able to spend time with their kids and parents which further become the reason for shifting of their concern to other aspect of life. On the other hand, by offering them longer holidays they can enjoy the time with their families with free mind. Taking extended holidays not only improves the personal lives of the employees but also boost their satisfaction level towards employers. The longer holiday policy is cardinal to maintain trust of employees towards companies.
To conclude, stress among employees, such as pressure of work deadline and job security are getting wider and they are not able to think about new ideas so providing longer leaves to encourage employees is a constructive approach.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37282229965 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79549798236 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7951349015 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173525903905 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695580472526 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463146148072 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100373859154 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535668487544 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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