Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students?
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
starting a private business means a growth for a nation. this what the famous economist Adam Smith said hundreds of years ago. Initiating a privately owned business is helpful not only for the person who starts it, but also for economy in general. While some citizens fear to start a private-owned business due to its inherent risk, governments and financial institutions could help those citizens by offering financial support.
starting a private owned business means a risk of loosing that business. History of companies has told us that disastrous losses of money may happen, even with good planning and management. For example, the financial crisis that occurred in 2008 led to loss of thousands of jobs throughout the USA. More than a half of these losses affected private owned businesses, and the losses were enormous. The owners of those businesses, in turn, were not new to their careers and had well-established companies. They had planned their business and managed it appropriately beforehand. However, because economy is inter-connected, when a giant financial institute fell the whole economy collapsed. Thats why some entrepreneurs fear to start their own businesses and prefer, instead, to work in public companies.
governments and financial organizations can help by providing insurance and monetary support. With that I mean if the businesses above were insured, the dramatic losses would have not happened. insurance provide a sense of safety to investors and entrepreneurs. this in turn encourages citizens to bring their money forward and start their business. Additionally, banks could support investors by reducing the interest rate. For instance, if the interest rate is reduced from 5% to 3%, this will incentivize investors and boost economy.
In conclusion, starting a new business entails stress and anxiety of loosing that business. Governments and major financial firms should invest in their citizens talents to promote the nations economies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50488599349 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99896886579 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57654723127 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5674142513 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.35 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.034336111602 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0120461844586 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0172878201851 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0218987376658 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182477590296 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.