why go to university?
Everyone would like to be more and more proficient day by day. Gaining knowledge is the best and fast approach to be successful and having a wealthy life, nowadays. Attending university is crucial for who like to be knowledgeable and have a high hierarchy in the society. Some individuals may prefer to entrance business without going university and take about 4- years to education but others not. I try to give examples for reasons that mentioned in this paragraph about advantageous of educating.
Not studying in a university does prepare people to have a good job but helps them to make their life more enjoyable. A person who finishes their career success will find more vocational opportunities with a competitive salary. It is obvious that finding a suitable job with high income enhance people's ability to afford their life much better. For instance, the people who give up university and signed up in the corporation may have a less salary and also less beneficial in contrast to some who first attend to university and then employ in that corporation. By educating people will get a high hierarchy in the society in contrast others don’t attend. Consequently, should study in a university do improve people’s social position and their income.
Having an autonomous life is a favor for adultness. Furthermore, attending to university prepare a great opportunity for who want to overcome their life challenges independently. Since many universities are far from the homeland, students should be in the dormitory and live with other students from other cities with different habits and cultures. Being by them learn the student augment their threshold of endurance and also learn them how to stand with people that are totally diverse from them. The consequence of this situation is to prepare them to be a strong person in society bigger than family and university. As a result, if the student had not attended to the university never would be valuable society members like those have attended to.
Being in an academic atmosphere and connect with a learned and adopt people enrich students wisdom and give them the ability to help other humans in all around a world. Some weird people attend to university neither for finding a job nor for having a high hierarchy in the vocation. These people just want to learn more and more and do research for improving the science ability in a variety of areas. For instance, I remember a doctor who has been researching ways of cure cancer many years and visited patients for free. He always said that science is the most powerful equipment for those want to help people all around the world.
In the nutshell, attending in the college or university most of the time is the best way to have a good job, to be a more valuable society member, and to fortify personability in overcoming issues. As a result, knowledge is a power and by being accomplished knowledgeable people you can do every possible thing.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 83
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, for instance, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2479.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.958 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8099672596 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 805.5 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9534566025 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.291666667 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120890960459 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396094321033 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519339493951 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753060966461 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334908072871 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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