Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Some people argue that the amount of household waste being recycled is inadequate and that recycling should be of citizen legal responsibility. From my perspective, I totally support this idea in terms of its environmental and economic benefits.
First of all, considering the environmental aspect, legal requirements forcing people to recycle would be a huge contribution to ecosystem protection. It is widely known that the uncontrolled waste disposal has been causing great damage to the environment. Campaigns promoting recycling to save nature have been constantly conducted yet not effectively. This is possibly because inhabitants are not fined for dumping garbage illegally, thus, they are not scared of the consequence. Therefore, tougher measure by the government must be taken so that people will not dispose of waste insensibly and recycle more.
Secondly, regarding the economic facet, laws for recycling will help save a gigantic amount of state budget spent on waste disposal every year. It should be noted that the public’s refusal to recycle results in their spending more to buy new stuff. In this case, governmental regulations would be of great help for both sides. Specifically, compulsory recycling would make citizens more conscious before littering and resort to reusing things if they aspire to reduce their spending.
In conclusion, laws should be made in order to raise people awareness on the significance of recycling and give them more motivation to convert usage of old belongings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51489361702 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05557398333 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629787234043 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6687499186 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297658177889 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102671408817 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638065781172 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178024835224 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313099341012 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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