Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in group while others believe that it is better for them to study on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in group while others believe that it is better for them to study on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a topical debate whether the efficiency would be achieved through solitary study or learning with others. In this essay, I will give a strong argument on both sides as below.

On the one hand, studying alone benefits for the ones who love doing their own research. They can carry out the study with their own pace without any rush or disturbance from the outsiders. Moreover, whenever they face a difficulty, they tend to look for a solution from different resources; this enables their self-study skill. For example, when my younger brother was at secondary school, he studied how to code a program via Youtube and now he has become a programmer working for a well-known Japanese corporation.

On the other hand, students can enjoy a number of merits from group work. Perhaps, the greatest one is building up the ability to work with other students which arouses a sense of community for each participant. As doing so, members who have different talents would lend a hand for the others in the same group to achieve their goals. Additionally, having a friend to study together is definitely more interesting than doing it alone as students can share their experiences and motivate each other. There is always someone watching and push all members to finish the assignments before deadlines.

To sum up, anyone who has a firm characteristic will find it perfect to study alone while group work brings its participants a multitude of advantages as a whole. In my opinion, it is a smart choice to work with others, especially in studying.

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2019-05-06 Jagdeep kaur 84 view
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'watches'.
Suggestion: watches
...ate each other. There is always someone watching and push all members to finish the assi...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, second, so, well, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90874524715 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73584119018 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627376425856 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4978721922 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300263108663 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962923186842 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492474900031 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15144971021 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667029093996 0.056905535591 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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