A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past.
Write a reply to your friend. In your letter:
tell your friend you understand the problem
explain what happened to you in the past
suggest possible solutions to the problem.
Dear ha,
I hope that you will get this letter soon. As you mentioned in your last letter regarding to work, I read it and I faced it in the past so I understand your feeling.
I have worked in the HST technology department for three years and those was the years that I cannot forget. I had problems with transportation and accommodation.
But, I overcome that situation by these solutions which I’m going to suggest it for you. Firstly, try to collect more information about the city, secondly, make calls with other colleagues in the same branch where you go. Finally, you should take this issue as a motivation to improve and showing your skills to get a better chance in the future either get a promotion in your company or move to another big company with a higher salary than you have now.
Hope to see you soon and let me know if these suggestions work for you or not?
Best wishes,
hai
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- Some people believe that family members are important than friends.Do you agree or disagree? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59393939394 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5611349642 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648484848485 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9578390825 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2222222222 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36164558313 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133000722195 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087930649373 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215536692364 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805302862606 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.