Some people believe that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on health and that other measures are required.
The recent surveys carried out the most effective way to reform the hygiene level. Whether sport activities are the best way to soar public health is a question that requires careful consideration. In this essay, I will deal with this challenge and on the closer examination discuss both views.
The first group have the thinking that sport activities play vital role to reduce the dangerous of some diseases or even they can reform our peril habitats. Approximately, two of third researchers believe that these new undetected problems due to insufficient sport facilities. Because of that, government are the sibling of critics. People insist that the majority districts are deprived of some proper and sufficient facilities in addition managers should take some steps to defeat these problems.
On the other cases, the rest people who experienced best facilities have different views. In their opinion, soaring the number of facilities are not the only solution. It is accepted by this group that sport activities have impact on the level of public health but some measures like the role of parents to teach their children to secure themselves or the undeniable effect of social medias are needed to be assembled to improving the level of hygiene level.
At the final stage, it should be mentioned it is true that every movement for improving any problems need a dire factors and experts to detect the main purpose of these efforts. Every members of each society have the same duties to suggest or help their people to improve the level of general well-being. Public health level is one of these well-beings that requires co-operation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ective way to reform the hygiene level. Whether sport activities are the best way to so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, third, well, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12267657993 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66699543769 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.695578816 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296596260597 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884755646564 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595016889944 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16677530158 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571689909814 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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