Letter to the editor asking for help in the address of a person who was recently covered in an article (the published person seems to be your childhood friend). Task expected the user to ask for the address of the person, suggesting the Editor on how he could help the examinee in connecting with the published person and why would the examinee want to connect with the person)
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to get your help for to find the address of a person who recently wrote an article related to current law and order situation in Karachi.
The person who wrote an article on the above mention topic seems to be my best childhood friend because he has a similar name and way of writing has too much resemblance with my friend. I recently came from Australia after 10 years, unfortunately, I lost the contact number of my friend and he also changed his residence that why I cannot able to make a contact with him. I read an article in your newspaper yesterday and I believe that was written by my childhood friend.
I need your help to provide me the address of my friend if it is not possible due to your privacy policy than provide me with any contact information that helps me to meet my friend.
I look forward to hearing from you on urgent bases with the hope of your cooperation.
Yours Sincerely,
Nadeem Matloob
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- Letter to the editor asking for help in the address of a person who was recently covered in an article (the published person seems to be your childhood friend). Task expected the user to ask for the address of the person, suggesting the Editor on how he c 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at was written by my childhood friend. I need your help to provide me the addres...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ion that helps me to meet my friend. I look forward to hearing from you on urg...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50568181818 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49259621655 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607954545455 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.49889085 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282250786505 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122682041456 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894265037331 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157285797509 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102674837909 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.