The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The diagram gives us the information about percentage of Australian people, who did physical exercise regularly in 2010.
The highest result shows the group of people aged 15-24, where 52.8% of female did everyday activity. In general, it can be seen, that womans did physical activity more than mens. Womans from group of people 45 to 54 had the highest value. It is 53.3%. In that time, the lowest percentage in group of people 35-44. It is 47.7%. Also, in group of people 65 and over results are similar for both genders, about 47%. The smallest percentage in men group illustrate people from 35 to 44 ages. It is just under 40%.
Based on this graph, the situation with regular physical activity in 2010 at the Australia can be seen
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- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 56
- People living in the 21st century are enjoying better quality of life compared to people who lived in the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people believe that it is a good to share as much information as possible in scentific research, bussiness and the academic world. Other believe thar some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both these views and g 61
- The maps below show the cente of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for it is development.Summarise the information by selectind and reporting yhe main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 613.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 130.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71538461538 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36549405625 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638461538462 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 179.1 283.868780488 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5650957128 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.7272727273 112.824112599 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8181818182 22.9334400587 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312679976421 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943218609198 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865251729708 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212217935947 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616978216448 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 61.2550243902 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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