As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
While technology is invented by human thinking only, the above statement projects a negative relation between two. Reliance on technology helps to complete regular activities more efficiently in less time thus providing opportunities to think for further developments. Now-a-days our surrounding is full of machines and technologies, in absence of which life can be very tough, including automobiles, communication, networking etc.
Basically technology introduced a huge platform which can be used for personal as well as social welfare. there are abundant scopes to enhance the existing features and innovating new functionalities. it all derived by human acumen. invention of computer can describe it best. it is used for basic computation initially but with the power of human brilliance its domain is expanded drastically. We can easily visualize revolutionary change in field of networking, communication, banking, software development, automation, machinery etc.
Along with conveniences and comfort of automation, problems also arise. For solving problems human are responsible/ promoted to think and come up with improvement. Although advent of internet enhance the capability of connectivity and knowledge transfer but risk of hacking and loss of personal information also come up. automobile industry plays vital role in making life easier but resources like petrol are very limited. All these problems provide a new possibility to think so that hurdles can be solved. but it’s a never-end journey. Every invention leads to obstacles which need to be solved for further progress.
However technology provides a huge resources and domain for exploration. person can utilize these measures according to their personal creativity and smartness. With the help of online education system, a person can learn as much as want and gain knowledge. there is abundance of material and outlook but to inspect it proficiently basic qualification and ability is mandatory.
Thus it can be concluded that tough technology provides ways to live our life comfortably by being dependent on it but it saves quality time which can be effectively used for development and progress in accordance to mental capabilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67664670659 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21902377984 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6424135228 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2857142857 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9047619048 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165437482869 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048375274711 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501964411462 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927863188017 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364603484905 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.