With the growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Population in many countries is thrving beyond the alarming rate and providing food to all, is becoming a matter of huge concern. A segment of society assert that GM food is the best alternative, to overcome the problem of food shortage. I have dissenting opinion and believes that GM crops production is not the effective way to deal with the problem, as it has several side effects.
The predominant reason for avoiding genetically modified crops is its harmful effect on the human health. Naturally produced food is unequivocally beneficial, as it contain all the natural ingredients which are required by our body. Although scientists try to add all the vitamins and mineral in this crops along with increase in production, but these artificially increase in production is like playing with nature, whenever human tried to alter the nature, environment has always given the reply, same is the case with GM crops. For instance, many people are suffering for various diseases because of eating this unhealthy food. Therefore, GM crops can feed the growing population, but it is of no use because it will results into numerous health issues.
On the other hand, if government really want to overcome the food shortage problem their are ways to tackle this. Primarily, motivating people to opt for farming as profession, most of the farmers are illiterate specially in third world countries. They do not have any idea of effective utilization of land. If state provide proper knowledge of crop insurance, purchase the produced crops at better rate, more literate and educated people will take farming as profession and ultimately production will increase. Apart from this spreading awareness about the adverse effects of increasing population, will solve the problem to some some extend in long run.
In conclusion, Gm crop may be the easiest way to increase the food production, but not the ideal way. I think the controlling the population and inspiring specialist people to start farming as career is the better solution. Health of the citizens is the most important factor to consider along with increasing agricultural production.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19942196532 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83333267819 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583815028902 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4632377892 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205725652916 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647699578951 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325694963279 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124709183321 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135183107311 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.