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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Sentence: The parents have a role to lead their kids to become a good person who useful with the society.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to who and useful
Sentence: The teacher give a more attention to the students, so the kids can improve their social abilities and apply it in the right place.
Description: The fragment teacher give a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, past tense
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 100 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 263 350
No. of Characters: 1156 1500
No. of Different Words: 100 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.027 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.395 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.155 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.786 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.311 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.396 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.6 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5