Essay topics:
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Votes
This essay topic by users
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2014-01-03 | muftia anwar | 62 | view |
| 2014-01-03 | wibby.aldryani | 65 | view |
| 2014-01-02 | Fardhani Dwi Aristya Putri | 60 | view |
| 2014-01-02 | rahmiedriyanti | 55 | view |
| 2013-12-09 | sprigidts | 65 | view |
Essay Categories
Essays by user Fardhani Dwi A…
:
- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. 65
- This essay would consider about the advantages and disadvantages of existing tourism to introduce their unique culture which faces to phenomena environment surround the tourism places get worse. (REWRITE) 65
- It is important to ensure that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school To what extent do you agree or disagree 74
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
- Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. 75
Sentence: The parents have a role to lead their kids to become a good person who useful with the society.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to who and useful
Sentence: The teacher give a more attention to the students, so the kids can improve their social abilities and apply it in the right place.
Description: The fragment teacher give a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, past tense
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 100 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 263 350
No. of Characters: 1156 1500
No. of Different Words: 100 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.027 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.395 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.155 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.786 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.311 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.396 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.6 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5