Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
There is a group of people that believe that big organizations and industries should be located outside the city premises. I think that I believe traffic and pollution can be reduced by shifting them out of cities than having them near to city centers for minor benefits.
The main advantage of relocating the industry and big corporations out of cities is that it will reduce the traffic congestion inside the city that will ultimately help in reduction of pollution. The quality of air will become better and the noise generated by the heavy vehicles will be reduced that helps in reduction of stress levels among people. Furthermore, more houses can be provided to the residents. For example, moving a Coca Cola factory on the outskirts of the City Dubai will empty up space for the construction of a housing society. Therefore, relocating industries and organizations will not only reduce the traffic and pollution but also create space for more houses to build.
Admittedly, there is a minor drawback for relocating to ruler areas and most notably is the difficulty in commuting of employees. The employer has to provide transport to its workers that will be an extra cost for them but it is not a critical issue as the companies are having big profits. For example, DuCab industry has giving pick and drop service to its employees and running four buses for this purpose. So, there is a slight disadvantage of mobility for employees when industries move out of cities but it can be solved by providing transport.
In conclusion, although by relocating industry and big companies to villages or outskirt of cities will create a minor issue for transportation but can be solved easily and have more benefits than its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96232876712 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79994395502 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8543492081 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177380193458 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748659157204 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305200915514 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115994777901 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030608108463 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.