As global trade increases many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Is it a good or bad trend?
From birth to death, most of our efforts are concerned with fulfillment of basic needs, like food, shelter and clothing, but daily needs are increasing due to global trade, which produced in other countries. This essay will explore how it is good or bad for globalization.
To begin with, employment rate is increasing day by day due to global trade, because many people get job opportunities in other countries. Moreover, some people get chance to travel in foreign nations, which increase their knowledge, because they can know about languages and cultures of other countries. After that, it also helpful to improve their confidence level and communication skills, because they meet many kinds of people, who are most knowledgeable .Furthermore, people can know about new trend of other countries, because every country have own trend.
On the flip side, While some people think it also stimulate the wastage of money, because some ordinary people choose those trend easily and thay spend large amount of money on those fashions. Besides this, global trade also decrease the economy, because when people people buy foreigner products, then their money go outside from the country.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But according to me global trade is beneficial for everyone, Because in this era every person is very fashionable and intelligent, it provide them different kinds of products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23275862069 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62356636577 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633620689655 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 1.71428571429 525% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0317217341 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.888888889 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.25397266985 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289266555177 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11299595028 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845884872259 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161786571988 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110614642602 0.0609392437508 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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