An increasing number of people are buying what they need online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
World has entered into a digital era where everything is available online. This makes shopping easier and hence the rise in the trend of purchasing online. This essay will explore both advantages and disadvantages of online shopping.
On one hand, firstly, a person can easily purchase any item online on less price than available at store as the vendors who are selling online don’t have to pay rents for physical shops. Also, there are numerous websites and mobile applications that are comparing the prices of different products and giving cheap options to users. For example, I had purchased a mobile plan online by comparing it with various dealers on a single website. Furthermore, shopping has become easier than ever as a person can even order weekly groceries from an online store that will be delivered at his house without any extra cost. This way he can skip the long queues and spend that time on working on any project or relaxing with family.
On the other hand, with the online shopping comes the security issues of hacking or identity theft, that is, malicious softwares are being used by the hackers to get the bank details of the person and transfer the money into their account without the knowledge of the owner. For instance, such as incident had happened to one of my friend. As soon as his salary transferred to his account, the hackers moved it to their account. Additionally, the selling of counterfeit products are on the rise through these websites. People only check the brand and place order without being knowing whether it is a genuine product or not. Many people fell into this trap and news channels are informing about these incidents on daily basis.
In conclusion, although purchasing online makes life easier but security issues of hacking, identity theft and selling of fake items are on the rise also. So, government needs to take steps to tackle these issues and people have to be careful while shopping online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 572, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...check the brand and place order without being knowing whether it is a genuine product or not....
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...d selling of fake items are on the rise also. So, government needs to take steps to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92469879518 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45616786078 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575301204819 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0874499647 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15779184178 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508178379491 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481322211486 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104005034202 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402628225665 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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