You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a town which is far from your home.
Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter:
say which electrical goods you want
ask questions about the cost of the goods and how to pay
explain how you will collect the goods.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear...
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about the availability and some information of TP Link wireless router, model number 4z52,3 and TP Link wireless range extender having model number 5DR.
I will be thankful if you can send me a quotation, mentioning unit price for each item, including all government taxes and delivery charges to Dubai. Furthermore, I will like to know about the warranty details for each product separately and I will be very happy, if you could enclose the specification sheet for the product with the proposal. Also, please include the mode of payment in the quotation, such as, current dated cheque or bank transfer or cash on delivery. Whereas, if the goods are not in the stock, please mention the date of availability of them. Also, are there any extra charges for holding the commodities?
I can collect the goods from the shop itself as I will be visiting the town for work purpose next month.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
James.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...livery charges to Dubai. Furthermore, I will like to know about the warranty details...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94186046512 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63835646269 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656976744186 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7821448766 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143089384584 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602722600046 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449215179808 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894890614108 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368394951098 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.