Migration to cities are increasing and public transport must be developed.s.
Recently, the phenomenon of increasing of migration to cities and its corresponding impacts have sparked e heatred debate. Although contested by many that the matter of complex procedures is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both costructive and consequently positive by a substantial number of individuls. I am inclned to believe that developing of public transportations can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a general standpoint, problem of migration can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that crucial issues, as well as ultimate outcomes, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered current policies. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both this common phenomenon and accordingly chaging of citeis apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of a public arena, improving of public transportations might increase the consequences of critical needs. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious universities has asserted that the downside of creative processes is correlated negtively with vital issuse. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of this incresing of populatin cites.
to conclude, while there are several arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of situation of growing population cities far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of this unique phenomenon prove the significant of total outcomes, but only pinpoint thorny issues’ potential implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72357723577 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31571788031 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674796747967 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7726983944 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196057122763 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659058034494 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837897737137 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105065329383 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704965499234 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 11.5310837438 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.4 8.32886699507 137% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 55.0591133005 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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