Cultural shock is new worry leading to less immigration. What are possible options to eradicate this issue?
Culture shock is difference of lifestyle, language and traditions which immigrants face while they move from one country to another. Due to these cultural differences, people avoid migrating to various countries even when they get exemplary opportunities. Cultural shock effects people in multiple ways and can be eradicated by taking appropriate steps.
To begin with, people moving from one country to another in search of good opportunities, face various cultural shocks like lifestyle differences and language barriers. For instance, majority of people in India do not eat meat or chicken but when they move to countries like USA or Canada, they find these food products readily available and thus have to adjust as per availability. Further, a person moving from India to Spain where, Spanish is the most spoken language, face many difficulties in various aspects of life like shopping from local vendor or travelling in public transport.
Cultural shock will not be an issue if world governments take keen interest in eradicating this problem. Firstly, governments can make foods of all varieties available in all major cities of the world. Further, they can educate the local people to use international languages like English, which is spoken by everyone.
To conclude, cultural shock leads to less immigration as people feel stressed and companionless in foreign lands. This problem can be eradicated by our governments by providing a comfortable and homely environment in their country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94347359728 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7098984267 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.818181818 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16035972021 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749589593884 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773304438921 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118801067279 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621388271058 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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