Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods.
To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
n my point of view, this statement is unsustainable, ecologically and economically talking. By this I mean that if some country is growing exclusively based in increasing your production, he will need more countries consuming and purchasing what he is producing. Then, I think that no one should depends on others countries to make your economy expand. Other hand is that producing more goods will affect environment in negative way, boosting climate changing.
Understandably, a few people assume that elevating the number of goods and materials in production to increase some economy’s nation would be important. Otherwise, there is a solidly way to do it. Actually, most relevant economies in international scenario are investing in creativity and innovation instead of just produce each time larger number of goods. South Korea, for instance, began to invest in high technology products to sell them easier in international markets. They’re producing smartphones and cars such as Samsung and Hyundai. These goods must require specific technological abilities; and this is changing the way other countries are seeing Koreans.
In my opinion, other negative side of production of large number of goods is the price of transportation and delivery of them. Indeed, countries that have been produced a large number of materials instead of high technological ones, have problem with the infrastructure to transport it. Brazil and China are examples of this fact. They need more reliable roads, different modal transportation and larger infrastructure generally talking. They already have been invested in this, however it’s not been enough because they truly depend on the tremendously high number of good to make their economy keep sustainable.
I would argue as well that producing more products instead of investing in creativity is contributing to worsen climate and environmental issues. If people are consuming more, this means they are producing more trash either. Our plastic garbage have been, mostly, unfortunately, left in ocean and seas around the world; and this is causing undeniable problems to these echo systems as well.
So, finally, I would say that I disagree a hundred percent with that sentence. I truly think that investing in specialization and research for new ideas are much important to make some country’s economy grow solidly and reliably. There many varieties of problems that can been caused by this kind of production; and I believe that it should be avoided as soon as possible by them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, i mean, i think, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40703517588 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09418412585 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557788944724 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9632875842 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.476190476 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9523809524 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164422997906 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04903669155 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390549524664 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952474668767 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341384251545 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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