Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages of living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
People’s preferences regarding the place to live has changed these days. There are many who claim that residing in apartments offer more pros as compared to living in a house. Even I believe the same is true and the former out of two accommodations does have some unmatched characteristics.
To begin with, in today’s scenario when families are getting nuclear and people are frequently migrating from one place to another for the purpose of study or work, it is quite manageable to maintain an apartment. The reason behind this is that most of the apartments facilitate their residents with common cleaning and maintenance services which people have to create themselves living in independent houses. Moreover, the level of security offered by apartments is also higher relatively because the entrance to apartments is always guarded by security personnel who do not let anybody enter without security check and owner’s approval. Also, this is more affordable by apartment dwellers.
Furthermore, apartments do have various additional benefits for the families living in such as children get a park or a play area to spend recreational time with their friends. There are also other facilities like swimming pools, sports clubs et cetera which are undoubtedly liked by people. This means that people do not have to travel outside their community to carry out such activities. Also, there are secure reserved parking places allotted to the families dwelling in the apartments eliminating the chances of conflicts.
However, choosing a house to live has its own exclusive benefits. First of all, it is spacious and people can also have guests easily accommodated without any discrepancy. Moreover, it can be renovated or modified as per the convenience and will of the owners bestowing them complete independence. This is something that can make people get inclined towards it.
To conclude, without any doubt apartments do fulfill all the needs of a modern citizen to live life hassle free which a house may fail to do. Thus, it can be said that despite having own sets of pros and cons, houses do fall behind apartments in comparison.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: There are other; There are also
...d recreational time with their friends. There are also other facilities like swimming pools, sports ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21264367816 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90180945003 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6020170739 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.705882353 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251770139267 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819113890334 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747713596518 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144380753052 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695046742889 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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