Leisure is a growing industry, but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative. Do you agree and disagree?
Nowadays, technology are breaking through our world. it is growing and booming than anything else. The computerized life we are living is affecting people's life by making them living a sedentary lifestyle. there is a phenomenon that we have to take care of. this phenomenon is that most people are not interacting with each others and they are feeling bored all the time. this essay will be talking about how the technology influences our life.
Everything now is going to be digitalized in our lives, which will lead to a lazy unhealthy lifestyle. The technology has merits and demerits. we all know that dealing with computers is safer due to its accuracy. Furthermore, there is diversification in the devices to deal with like: Ipads, notepads, laptops...etc. So it really makes our life easier. Hence, most of the companies all their work depends on the computers, and there is no workspace without these kinds of devices.
However, the disadvantages of this robotic life are influencing everyone and especially the youngsters. The teenagers or the children are all well knowing how these devices are working more than the decades. The drawbacks of this is that it is killing the social life and this is a vital issue that we have to face.
To conclude, that the technology is playing a vital role in life and it is very important in the daily life, but we should know how to use it and how to specify time in the day to go through it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, so, well, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74900398406 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77584334302 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553784860558 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7401225935 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0728450111717 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245402604726 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262408641275 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452066001598 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348011034035 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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