Leisure is a growing industry, but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative. Do you agree and disagree?
The tourism industry has experienced a tremendous boom in the recent years which creates various new modern methods of entertainment and it leads to making people less creative. I agree with the statement that technology has changed the way of enjoyment.
To start with, nowadays most of the leisure activities in tourist places are machine oriented because it provides more profit in less energy. Earlier, leisure meant going out and meeting people, playing outdoor games, mountain trekking and many more, however, now people would like to choose the easiest ways for the entertainment. Actually, in present times, life is very hectic and people are workaholic. Owing to this, it becomes an uphill task for them to spare some time for the outdoor leisure activities like games, trekking, and mountain climbing etcetera.
Apart from the above, people also influenced from technology because it is easy to get entertain inside the four walls of the house without any hard cost and efforts. They can watch the countless programs on national and international channels; they can play online games; they can do arm-chair tourism by which they can visit any historical place or museum sitting in their arm-chair. To illustrate, most of the people normally spend weekends at home and watch the movie on large projector screens at home and do not go outside.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that definitely technology has changed the way of living, entertaining and working and the people should try not to pressurize from this. However, they can take the advantage of technology to enhance their creativity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, so, apart from, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1877394636 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67406052068 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628352490421 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3923262392 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.090909091 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206022874354 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712959986121 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265483924333 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119530173102 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258051820769 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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