The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourages people from doing activities which usually involve very little risk. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a spreading belief that bad news should be limited because of its negative effect on audiences. Personally, I totally disagree with this statement as what will be analyzed below.
I believe that the most important reason for arguing which media should not limit their negative reporting is the fact that everything has two sides, hence people have the right to know all about the things happening around them even bad news. Moreover, reporting only good news would let people live in illusion that needs to be rejected. For example, there is some information about how hurt cows stuff when they are feed by the human in order to collect cows’ milk. This news might make people stop using milk which is very usual with their life. But it’s still the truth covered by milk brands as well as advertisement.
In addition, people have to be informed about their virtual world in order to make them take responsibility for their decisions. Firstly, this enables people to decide what risks are really involved in doing a particular activity. Secondly, informing bad news is also a way to alert people to dangerous situations around them, increasing people awareness in the rough times as this period. For instance: Many rapes happening in India were reported on international newspapers, so that women and female tourists would be more careful when they’re walking alone in India.
In conclusion, I believe that although showing bad news would make people live negatively, reporting these types of news still need to be continued to prevent people from living in illusion and warn people of dangers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05597014925 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58931297015 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.343944257 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.916666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270768197195 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952184305103 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609922754737 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158718441169 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184185655894 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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