Sending criminals to the prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree?
Imprisoning has been the final solution to come up against the crimes committed by people. It is often said that offenders should be sentenced to imprison as they break the law while the opponents me included hold this idea that education and career training are two effective ways which can help delinquents to be reformed.
Some people believe that criminals should be sent to the jail as they are a threat for other innocent citizens. we have to consider the emotion of the victims and their families, which is sometimes irrecoverable. The penitentiary as penalty for lawbreakers make them afraid to do the crime again. There are, however, some disadvantages by sending them to the jail that we have to take into consideration.
It is claim that Education and career training can be an assist for those who commit the crime. There are number of reasons behind this theory but the of which stands out is the reason of crime. A new research conducted by The USA government shows that more that 70 percent of juvenile delinquency resulted by poverty. It seems that if they had employed and had monthly salary, they would not have committed the crime. As the pivotal point for finding a job is knowledge and experience, which are usually job requirements, these kinds of assist provide them with big opportunity to be hired.
All in all, as the number of crimes are resulted by poverty, education and job training are two approaches to reduce wrongdoing in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and their families, which is sometimes irrecoverable. The penitentiary as penal...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...ledge and experience, which are usually job requirements, these kinds of assist pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85657370518 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7224072812 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581673306773 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0922911127 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.583333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159872502585 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524239023088 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505105456794 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920507777618 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149504706454 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.