You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to your English speaking friend. In your letter:
1. Explain why you have moved
2. Describe the new house
3. Invite your friend to visit
Dear Sam,
I hope things are going well with you and your family.
Sorry for writing you after a long time as I was busy searching for a new house. It has been a month now and I have finally settled down in this new house.
As you might have noticed from you last visit to previous house that it was space crunched. We just had one bed room to accomodate me, my wife and my kids. Morever, the kitchen & plumbing were in need for renovations but my landlord refuse to get it done.
Nevertheless, I have found a recently renovated house which has 3 bedrooms, an additional bathroom and mordern concept kitchen. As now we have an extra bedroom for the guests, it would be nice if you can make trip to stay with us for a weekend. The new house is just 5 mins walk to beach, which I am sure you would like to explore. I do remember your idea of relaxing viewing ocean from our last trip to Maldives.
it has been a while since we had barbeque together; why not take this oppourtunity to catch up over some good food and beer. Hope you will find time to visit me soon .
Best regards
Veejay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, I hope things are going well with you an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re going well with you and your family. Sorry for writing you after a long time ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...finally settled down in this new house. As you might have noticed from you last ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y settled down in this new house. As you might have noticed from you last vi...
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... but my landlord refuse to get it done. Nevertheless, I have found a recently re...
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...ean from our last trip to Maldives. it has been a while since we had barbeque ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a while since we had barbeque together; why not take this oppourtunity to catch ...
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Suggestion: .
...Hope you will find time to visit me soon . Best regards Veejay
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you will find time to visit me soon . Best regards Veejay
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ime to visit me soon . Best regards Veejay
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, nevertheless, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24880382775 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27418038168 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665071770335 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5988965091 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3076923077 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217495529521 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710048863059 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527540042245 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121166129253 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360356604243 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.