Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the modern era, a speed change of the word has played a prominent role in all societies. Due to it is paramount importance, the researcher believes that this change in the word has many effects on human life. A controversial question which is often raised this idea that whether the speed changes the word make the word is easier than past or not. I personally contend that technology is making more satisfied and happy than past; therefore, I agree with this opinion. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite factor to be mention that the main reasons for the technology are making easier life and satisfied than the past. To elaborate on my point, since human life is more complex than past, people need technology to make an easier life. Considering the Internet for instance. Since the world wide web is introduced to the human, it makes an easier life in many ways. People can do many duties with the net such as checking update news, finding a location with GPS, doing work at home as remote worker, buying product only by click some keys, and many other situation like this from their home so that they do not need to spend many times and energy to do this function. I think the technology not only make an easier life for people but also make more satisfied their lives than people were in the past.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that people have healthier lives. To shed more light on this matter, inasmuch as the technology is improved, citizenship can do their work from their home. In other word, people are able to do much duty only with their electronic devices like mobile phones, laptop, and many other items like this in their home so that they do not need to go out and spend many times in the traffic and air pollution which make people become anxious and angry. Furthermore, the human can save money and time using the internet. It is worth mentioning that, if people use eco_friendly equipment such as the internet, they can save the tree so that it helps to have better air. Based on the most recent study by Iran Census Bureau, 45% of the air pollution is increased by using people internet instead of paper base equipment, for saving more trees than past.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that change the world with high speed make life is easier and happier than past. I believe that technology not only make an easier life but also help people to have a healthier life
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- TPO 46 80
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- TPO 21 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63919821826 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34745143115 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47438752784 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9141773075 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.631578947 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6315789474 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214860375821 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704524974135 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535954215934 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138613346186 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284022291129 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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