Essay topics: Write a letter to restaurant manager. In your letter,
• Explain that you would like to apply for the job
• Give some details of any relevant experience that you have
• Specify the days and times that would suit you
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well.this is with reference to advertisement of job opening of 'Assistant manager logistics' posted in 'Dawn' newspaper dated 15th december, 2018. I wanted to apply for the opening, as my set of skills match with the required traits of job.
Let me explain you in detail. In past I have been working in a restaurant as logistics manager. I have had an experience of almost six years, which makes me an eligible candidate for the job. I have handled a high volume of task in my last job. Moreover, my set of skills i.e. management and financial give me an advantage of other candidates. Furthermore, I have recently completed my Masters degree in business management and that is something which has helped me to relate my professional experience with theoretical concepts.
Therefore, it is requested if you may please give me an appointment for afternoon on thursday dated 18th december, 2018. I shall be glad for this favour.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Regards
Ahmed Ali Arbani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well.this i...
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...rence to advertisement of job opening of Assistant manager logistics posted in Da...
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Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'december 2018'.
Suggestion: december 2018
...ics posted in Dawn newspaper dated 15th december, 2018. I wanted to apply for the opening, as ...
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... match with the required traits of job. Let me explain you in detail. In past I ...
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...l experience with theoretical concepts. Therefore, it is requested if you may pl...
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...ent for afternoon on thursday dated 18th december, 2018. I shall be glad for this...
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Suggestion: december 2018
...t for afternoon on thursday dated 18th december, 2018. I shall be glad for this favour. ...
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... 2018. I shall be glad for this favour. Looking forward to hearing from you. ...
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...forward to hearing from you. Regards Ahmed Ali Arbani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94318181818 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85783593645 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647727272727 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2537761103 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22343551164 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838972405501 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590029514831 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132884717009 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160744786031 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.