Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?
Provide relevant examples from you own experience.
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">In my point of view, free access to music is the positive thing however I don’t think this will be the same for films. Around 99% of music and films </span><span class="hiddengrammarerror">were propagated</span> through the internet. Most of the internet sites/apps do<span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"></span> not pose any strict restriction on who is <span class="hiddenspellerror">accessing</span> the sites. This is the major threat to the current generation of kids. There is no segregation between the content that <span class="hiddengrammarerror">was being viewed</span> by the kids. Few <span class="hiddengrammarerror">well-educated</span> parents are aware of this and using a proper application to secure their kids from such a scam. </p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"> However this is not the only drawbacks of free access to music and films, the most affected people because of this are the </span><span class="hiddenspellerror">distributors</span> and producers of those movies. For launching a movie into theatres these people would have risked their lives and spent a fortune. Their
major source of taking the invested money back is from theatrical allowances and ticket costs but because of easy access of movies through online will make their customer move away from them and lean towards the pirated version of the same at the lower cost. </p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">In my city, I have seen many such producers and </span><span class="hiddenspellerror">distributors</span> protesting against the pirated version of new movies and in some cases unreleased movies. They were also bankrupted and committed suicide because of the piracy issue.</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt">I<span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"> would like to <span class="hiddensuggestion"><span pre="to " style="cursor: default;">conclude</span></span> this by saying that though free access to music and films is a boon to everyone there are also people who <span class="hiddengrammarerror"><span pre="who " style="cursor: default;">are being affected</span></span> by the unsecured way in which it is progressing and there are also people suffering because of piracy. It would be great if necessary measures <span class="hiddengrammarerror"><span pre="measures " style="cursor: default;">were taken</span></span> against this and proper regulations may come in the </span>picture<span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"> to avoid the problems in the future.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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- Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?Provide relevant examples from you own experience. 56
- Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?Provide relevant examples from you own experience. 56
- Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?Provide relevant examples from you own experience. 56
- Nowadays people have free access to music and films online. Is this a positive or a negative development?Provide relevant examples from you own experience. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4116.0 1615.20841683 255% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 464.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.87068965517 5.12529762239 173% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.64117393872 2.80592935109 308% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433189655172 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1080.9 506.74238477 213% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.60771543086 143% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 269.629722954 49.4020404114 546% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 343.0 106.682146367 322% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.6666666667 20.7667163134 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0416569958003 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356474968537 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221986676725 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.041717066765 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013156287914 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.7 13.0946893788 303% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -26.31 50.2224549098 -52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.4 11.3001002004 234% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 34.76 12.4159519038 280% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 25.0 9.78957915832 255% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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